QUOTE (noWAYnoHOW @ May 26 2011, 09:01 AM)
please give feed back.
Haven't seen your other work yet. I appreciate that you have chosen to be creative.
#1. I think you are telling way too much and the show (the visuals) are obscured. Put the title of your piece in small print below your name, and show us what you are trying say.
#2. The middle of the poster is problematic for me but may convey exactly what you are trying to say. The graphic of JMM looking to the sky toward the upper left-hand corner of the Poster (where the title resides) is the reason attention is driven to the not quite empty space. The largest graphic is looking off in the opposite direction, off the poster. This leads a decent portion of the viewing public to move on.
Both of those graphics are poorly placed and probably need to be re-sized. It almost looks like JMM is sitting naked in a steam room. The proof is hidden by a smaller JMM looking off into space.
Are you trying to tell us that JMM is hiding something?
I'm not condemning your piece. These are just my first impressions.
Why not try the largest graphic a bit smaller and in the upper left-hand corner, the graphic in the bottom right-hand corner should be reversed and placed half way up, on the righthand edge, leave the bottom left-hand corner as is, and take the JMM looking skyward to the bottom right-hand corner. You might consider a Mexican flag graphic, in the background of the middle of the poster. Leave all verbiage out of the sandbox.